Nice Attempt For A First Essay

After looking over my essay again I noted some positive attributes that it had and also the negative attributes. First I feel my intro was strong because it set up the context of the topic I was going to elaborate on about the concept of the ideal man. Another strong attribute my essay had was quote analysis where I used relevant quotes and tied them into my discussion. On to the negative. First of all my quotations were too long and I would give plot summary leading to the quote, I didn't use concise topic sentences that related back to my thesis and made a hasty conclusion. Overall my essay was just decent