Analysis of Essays pt 3

I read essays A, D and H. I personally liked H because the writer introduces complexity in the very first sentence, while the thesis is clear and gives the reader insight to what the rest of the essay will discuss. The structure of the sentences at some points are run-on. On the other hand the writer is clear in discussing the different techniques used by each author in portraying characters. Overall it is a consistent essay that focuses on the main point and backs up their thesis.