Analysis of Three Essays

I chose to read B2, C2 and D2 . Personally I like D2 the best because the writer has an effective thesis claims that sets up their essay discussing how although Mr. Hurst is a minor character he is the epitome of the triviality of of the class-conscious aristocracy. The writer also uses quote that relate to the topic and is discussed and analyzed in a way that strengthens the writer's main point. The only aspect that i would change in this essay is at points the writer was vague on starting each paragraph and it was hard to hone in in what idea was going to be discussed.